Man, I don’t know what happened but some sort of virus knocked me on my ass last night. I got about “zero” sleep and lets just say things aren’t really good around my house right now.

However, before the bug hit full steam ahead last night I finished my changes to the first ten pages. A few minor tweaks but its going to set up the second and third ten pages a lot better.

If you’re interested I’ve attached the file to this post so you can see the differences. I might tweak it a bit more today, but honestly I’m a bit too weak to really do any serious writing today. Looks likes it’s just video games and movies on my plate as far as activity goes. I might finish reading “How NOT To Write a Screenplay” too. I don’t have much of that left.

Revised First Ten Pages

I found a pretty fun site last night. It’s called ScreenPlay Bandit and it’s someone else doing a similar type of experiment to what I’m doing on here. I think the person who is writing the screenplay is somewhere in the UK, based on the how they write, but I could be completely off. At any rate, its an interesting read so you should check it out. I’ve provided a link to it on the right side of the page in the “Screenwriter’s Blog” section of links.

Until next time…

Enjoy.
-Steve