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	<description>Just a guy trying to be a screenwriter</description>
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		<title>Comment on Good Feedback by steveonfilm</title>
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		<dc:creator>steveonfilm</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 09 Nov 2009 02:42:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Will do. BTW, and I can&#039;t stress this enough, the more time you spend planning your screenplay, the easier it will be to write. Don&#039;t half-ass on the outlining, or note cards, or whatever method you choose. Put in the time up front, and the writing is all that much easier.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Will do. BTW, and I can&#8217;t stress this enough, the more time you spend planning your screenplay, the easier it will be to write. Don&#8217;t half-ass on the outlining, or note cards, or whatever method you choose. Put in the time up front, and the writing is all that much easier.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Good Feedback by Kevin</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kevin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 08 Nov 2009 04:49:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks Steve, keep writing! (both your blog and your screenplays...)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks Steve, keep writing! (both your blog and your screenplays&#8230;)</p>
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		<title>Comment on Good Feedback by steveonfilm</title>
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		<dc:creator>steveonfilm</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 07 Nov 2009 23:35:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You know, that&#039;s &lt;em&gt;not&lt;/em&gt; a bad idea for a post. I think I&#039;ll write something about that later this week.

The political thriller sounds like fun. I&#039;ve written one but it&#039;s still rough around the edges. It&#039;s called Marianas. There&#039;s some old posts on the blog about it if you&#039;re interested.

As for watching movies... quick version....

I pause it a lot to see at what time certain events occur. That goes a long way to help me with timing and pacing.

I rarely take notes.

I pay close attention to try and figure out when various acts start and end, again paying attention to when those occur.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You know, that&#8217;s <em>not</em> a bad idea for a post. I think I&#8217;ll write something about that later this week.</p>
<p>The political thriller sounds like fun. I&#8217;ve written one but it&#8217;s still rough around the edges. It&#8217;s called Marianas. There&#8217;s some old posts on the blog about it if you&#8217;re interested.</p>
<p>As for watching movies&#8230; quick version&#8230;.</p>
<p>I pause it a lot to see at what time certain events occur. That goes a long way to help me with timing and pacing.</p>
<p>I rarely take notes.</p>
<p>I pay close attention to try and figure out when various acts start and end, again paying attention to when those occur.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Good Feedback by Kevin</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kevin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 07 Nov 2009 23:13:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;ve got a few. For my first screenplay I&#039;m going to try a political crime drama from a reporter&#039;s POV. Still working on characters and plot. 

I do have a question for you, maybe you could even do a post on it. What do you do when you watch movies? I&#039;m still trying to get my head around structure and character development, and I was wondering if you had some kind of method for analyzing what worked and what didn&#039;t in a movie you&#039;ve seen in order to help you with your writing. Because I watch movies all the time, but I feel like I need to become better at critiquing them to become a better writer. Thanks again for your blog!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ve got a few. For my first screenplay I&#8217;m going to try a political crime drama from a reporter&#8217;s POV. Still working on characters and plot. </p>
<p>I do have a question for you, maybe you could even do a post on it. What do you do when you watch movies? I&#8217;m still trying to get my head around structure and character development, and I was wondering if you had some kind of method for analyzing what worked and what didn&#8217;t in a movie you&#8217;ve seen in order to help you with your writing. Because I watch movies all the time, but I feel like I need to become better at critiquing them to become a better writer. Thanks again for your blog!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Good Feedback by steveonfilm</title>
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		<dc:creator>steveonfilm</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 05 Nov 2009 21:02:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I forgot to ask, any ideas on what you want to write about?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I forgot to ask, any ideas on what you want to write about?</p>
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		<title>Comment on Good Feedback by steveonfilm</title>
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		<dc:creator>steveonfilm</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 05 Nov 2009 21:00:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>That&#039;s awesome Kevin! You know, that&#039;s the whole reason I write on here. It&#039;s to let other aspiring writers know that they&#039;re not the only ones trying this out. And with enough work and determination, anyone can write a screenplay.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That&#8217;s awesome Kevin! You know, that&#8217;s the whole reason I write on here. It&#8217;s to let other aspiring writers know that they&#8217;re not the only ones trying this out. And with enough work and determination, anyone can write a screenplay.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Good Feedback by Kevin</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kevin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 05 Nov 2009 15:10:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Steve,

Today I&#039;m doing my first free-writing treatment of what will hopefully be my first screenplay. I check your blog often for inspiration. Sometimes it helps just knowing that I&#039;m not the only guy out there who is writing. We only hear the stories of the guys who have already made it, its refreshing to follow someone who is still learning and perfecting his craft. Keep it up!

Peace, Kevin.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Steve,</p>
<p>Today I&#8217;m doing my first free-writing treatment of what will hopefully be my first screenplay. I check your blog often for inspiration. Sometimes it helps just knowing that I&#8217;m not the only guy out there who is writing. We only hear the stories of the guys who have already made it, its refreshing to follow someone who is still learning and perfecting his craft. Keep it up!</p>
<p>Peace, Kevin.</p>
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		<title>Comment on 56 Points by steveonfilm</title>
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		<dc:creator>steveonfilm</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 21 Oct 2009 15:12:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey, thanks! Yeah, I&#039;m just some guy who likes to write, and figured maybe I can help encourage some others to do the same. Thanks for reading &quot;Served Cold,&quot; hopefully it was entertaining. If you need any help, or have any questions, let me know and I&#039;ll do what I can. My e-mail address is on my &quot;About&quot; page.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey, thanks! Yeah, I&#8217;m just some guy who likes to write, and figured maybe I can help encourage some others to do the same. Thanks for reading &#8220;Served Cold,&#8221; hopefully it was entertaining. If you need any help, or have any questions, let me know and I&#8217;ll do what I can. My e-mail address is on my &#8220;About&#8221; page.</p>
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		<title>Comment on 56 Points by Kevin</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kevin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 21 Oct 2009 15:05:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I stumbled across your videos on youtube a couple days ago, and I really found them encouraging. They led me here to your blog. I am just starting to design the story of what will hopefully by my first screenplay, so I&#039;m reading books like Story and Screenplay, and checking out everything I can find online. It is really cool to read your blog, because I feel you are someone who is a little further down the road of screenwriting then I am who is taking the time to help out people like me who are just starting out. So thanks for your blog! (I read your screenplay Served Cold, and am looking forward to seeing how it evolves in the next draft!)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I stumbled across your videos on youtube a couple days ago, and I really found them encouraging. They led me here to your blog. I am just starting to design the story of what will hopefully by my first screenplay, so I&#8217;m reading books like Story and Screenplay, and checking out everything I can find online. It is really cool to read your blog, because I feel you are someone who is a little further down the road of screenwriting then I am who is taking the time to help out people like me who are just starting out. So thanks for your blog! (I read your screenplay Served Cold, and am looking forward to seeing how it evolves in the next draft!)</p>
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		<title>Comment on About by steveonfilm</title>
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		<dc:creator>steveonfilm</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 20 Oct 2009 11:43:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ha! Yeah, my wife&#039;s the best. Those books are pretty good, I&#039;ve used them countless times. I hope you enjoy your screenwriting class. Sounds like fun!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ha! Yeah, my wife&#8217;s the best. Those books are pretty good, I&#8217;ve used them countless times. I hope you enjoy your screenwriting class. Sounds like fun!</p>
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