Posted by: steveonfilm | September 17, 2009

Served Cold Challenge: Day Twenty Six

I wish I had more to talk about, but editing is sort of hard to do play by play on. I did come across one thing I thought was pretty interesting tonight. In the course of one page, I had a character start their dialog with the phrase “I’m afraid…”

I’m afraid not.

I’m afraid it’s more than that.

I’m afraid so.

How the hell did I miss that the first time through? I’ll tell you how, it’s a minor character who’s only in one scene. This type of stuff is the reason you give what you wrote a once over before you let anyone else read it.

Until next time, keep writing!

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