Posted by: steveonfilm | February 19, 2011

Cyberspace Open – Winter 2011: First Draft Complete

I finished up my first draft an hour or so ago. I’m actually VERY pleased with how it turned out. I’m just over 5 pages right now, but I don’t see it being an issue to get it down to five or likely closer to four. There’s LOTS I want to cut.

My subtext is a little weak, mainly because at this point I wanted to capture the gist of the conversation and emotions at stake. But reworking my dialog to be less on the nose will get easier as I start to chip away at some of the busyness.

It’s definitely not a “happy” story, to say the least.


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